Ollie May

Oh, I'm so glad those days are over...psh, I wish! I've written quite a few scholarship essays (still do actually!) and this is my humble offering: -Be concise. One word ...

Damn, you guys are good. I go away to make coffee and come back to answers! Thanks again!

Oh, I love newly awakened powers! I'm interested to see how it is that the woman didn't hear her. I've already got my thoughts but I reserve judgment until the ...

Thanks much for the reviews and the advice guys! My biggest problem by far is adverb abuse, I like them too much for my own good. However, I'm now in ...

Thank you! :D If you ever come across those awkward parts, do give me a heads up again!

This was great writing! Your grammar is excellent, a trait that is AlWAYS admirable. And the storyline was creative and interesting. I guess my only issue with this piece is ...

Man, when you decide to violate people's comfort zones, you do an excellent job! Incest, child abuse, AND parent abuse. This is great work; edgy and very well written. I ...

I do like this! It has a lot of potential and I'm interested in seeing what you do with it. A couple of quick suggestions. As the people have said ...

This is my first attempt here at YWS so I'm not exactly sure of the protocol for posting. Hopefully this works out! Summary: She wears odd clothes. She doesn’t socialize ...

[pre]Hey there! I'm Ollie May, a nineteen year old sophomore at a small private college outside of Chicago. I like chocolate, snappy witticisms, and Monty Python. My favorite color is ...